Monday, January 5, 2015

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Crash (visions book one)
by Lisa McMann 
Is this story fair fair? Why/Why not?

This story is not fair. 
            
     1. It is not fair because Jules        2. It is not fair because            3. It is not fair because
    has no one to relate to, and          nobody will give Jules             Jules has no guidance  
   no one to talk about the               a chance, her friends and         with he vision. She is 
    crash with. Nobody                     won't family won't believe       left alone to deal with 
               understands her so it makes         her about the crash.                   he problem. She is the 
               her get really stressed.                                                                 only one with the vision.  

 Evidence                                          Evidence                                      Evidence
              "The vision thing scared the         "He stops fingering his phone,  "Hey-what was on the 
              living crap out of me for no          gently pulls his arms away        billboard again?"....
              scenes I'm seeing are meaning      says sarcastically. My heart      Trey narrows his eyes
              less. So I guess there's maybe       sinks."                                        and glances at me." Same
                                                                                                                       as always. Jose Cuervo.                                                                                                                                w                                                                                                                        why? "

               This quote shows how people      This quote shows how her        I wonder why the author 
               like the one that Jules is               (in this case) friend won't          chose to keep Jules as the
               talking to doesn't understand       believe her. He is making her    only one with the visions. 
               her situation. This makes me       feel bad and it is not fair to        I think that it gives more 
               feel bad for Jules. People             do that.                                       of a plot. Also this quote 
               should help their friends no                                                            really shows how Jules is
               matter what.                                                                                    alone in this situation.
          


          

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  1. There was a complication that effected the writing in this blog post

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